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erik
11/10/07, 12:10 AM
I'll get some brand new poetry here, this poem though is a little whimsy
and a little heart-pounding love,

dewlit drops,
of fear re-nounce their calling,

Sparks afire,
enlightened at best,
but heightened to,
store the pores of unrest,

surfacing desire,
kindles a noble quest,
while elliptical tides hold their path,

Sparks a feeling,
of genuine adoration,
with sparks of love,
this path is elation.

cmo
11/10/07, 12:38 AM
It sparks!

:flash: :flash: :flash: :flash: :flash:

erik
11/10/07, 02:46 AM
thanks cmo

ctivnan
11/10/07, 08:59 AM
This poem makes me remember the good ol' days when I was young and felt the sparks that young love offered...

thanks for this poem! I enjoyed it! ^^

q_sharon
02/16/08, 09:15 PM
sends one's heart to bliss!! :thankyou:

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erik
02/17/08, 11:07 PM
thanks Sharon thats great

sbenosa
02/27/08, 11:04 PM
I like it! It's good, erik! :-)

Post more of this, please...