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erik
11/10/07, 12:31 AM
fresh outta my mind

Risk, I insist is worth a try once,
but only if what is sought exists,

Reward, she slurred, is only as much as you can take,
but reward is enough if your bored of your fate,

If the rumble of manifest, gets in your ears,
unless your prepared there's much to fear,
for valor is a messenger with no mouth but good ears,
and so easily can be misled by instincts and mirrors,

who my friend will wake you,
when there's nothing to fight,
I hope heaven has some comfort,
and God blesses those who meant well but fell slight.

by Erik Estabrook

iyotoko
11/10/07, 08:21 AM
wow:type:......:cheers:

cmo
11/10/07, 09:59 AM
fresh outta my mind

Risk, I insist is worth a try once,
but only if what is sought exists,

Reward, she slurred, is only as much as you can take,
but reward is enough if your bored of your fate,

If the rumble of manifest, gets in your ears,
unless your prepared there's much to fear,
for valor is a messenger with no mouth but good ears,
and so easily can be misled by instincts and mirrors,

who my friend will wake you,
when there's nothing to fight,
I hope heaven has some comfort,
and God blesses those who meant well but fell slight.

by Erik Estabrook

This is very deep and meaningful!

:flash: :bravo: :flash:

ctivnan
11/10/07, 11:51 AM
It's philosophical! ^^
:wink1:

erik
11/10/07, 03:25 PM
ctivan, yes its philosophical, and also hints at the social being,

cmo I like how you think that about my poetry,
its a great complement to me,

thanks iyoutoko too.