Emerging Light

[erik]

Precibus kept in an encompassing shape,
splashes of blue swallowed by this black abyss,

what we fear most as fear plays host,
is possibility, bone-chilling, thrown off the edge,
worse than black death possibilty,

When possibilty takes hold,
it can change a mind for good,
but more than likely it'll just expand on the roots,
that have stood still in the mind,

see above the black,
invent your own cure,
be the emerging light,
and hold it so the next,
will have nothing to fear.


I really want to see what poetry you fellow coffers can come up with,
just try it, it won't be so bad, its worth a try at least.

[cmo]

Erik, this poem is like taking risk to the unknown. Once the unkown becomes known we become more secure of ourselves and confidence takes place.

:workout:

Good encouragement! :there:

[erik]

thanks cmo thats an effect that I think is awesome,
some people write and don't acheive any emotion,
some people just write for themselves, but any time
a reader or writer feels or gets helped by a poem,
its excellent, you should write a poem cmo

[cmo]

I may be able to appreciate poetry but not write poems.

:flash: :flash: :flash: :flash:

[erik]

cmo I bet you could write a very good poem,
you just have to sum up all the things around and how you feel creatively,
and two years ago I thought I was horrible at poetry and that might've been true,
but people saying thats pretty good or telling me what to work on,
that made my poetry, and truly if you can write an opinion on something you can write poetry.

[cmo]

Thanks for the encouragement. I may try but not now as I am super busy in my work.

:flame:

[erik]

cool I'll look forward to reading your poem then cmo

[cmo]

cool I'll look forward to reading your poem then cmo

Yeah, but not too soon! I have not idea how to start yet, haha!

:D

[juan]

Yeah, but not too soon! I have not idea how to start yet, haha!

:D

I believe that if there is a will, there is a way.

[iyotoko]

wow what an idea...... for me its to hard:zzzzzz:...:zzzzzz:...:zzzzzz: