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patty
11/04/08, 10:32 PM
FOR YOU
so lost and lonely

I am but a balloon,
Floating in the air,
Endlessly and seamlessly,
Above, unto the oblivion.

No where to go
Because you have let me go.
I have lost my value
For something new.

Never to see you again,
And the likes of my heaven.
From where the wind blows
Is the voice of my heart:

Waiting to float into your arms
Back, where I, once, belong
Hoping this isn't true;
Hoping to love you.

q_sharon
11/05/08, 05:19 AM
FOR YOU
so lost and lonely

I am but a balloon,
Floating in the air,
Endlessly and seamlessly,
Above, unto the oblivion.

No where to go
Because you have let me go.
I have lost my value
For something new.

Never to see you again,
And the likes of my heaven.
From where the wind blows
Is the voice of my heart:

Waiting to float into your arms
Back, where I, once, belong
Hoping this isn't true;
Hoping to love you.

:applaud::applaud: You are an excellent poet. Truly a poet in the making. I like this one. So poignant.

pinoypower
11/05/08, 11:31 AM
I love poetry especially of the romantic genre and I must admit that I am impressed with your early attempts. You're a promising poet. Keep it up.:c_o_o_l:

tcha
11/05/08, 02:36 PM
very touching... this moved me!

aurora
11/05/08, 04:38 PM
What a lovely poetry! Thank u for sharing your poetry to English Coffee!!!

yla
11/12/08, 05:37 AM
FOR YOU

so lost and lonely

I am but a balloon,
Floating in the air,
Endlessly and seamlessly,
Above, unto the oblivion.

No where to go
Because you have let me go.
I have lost my value
For something new.

Never to see you again,
And the likes of my heaven.
From where the wind blows
Is the voice of my heart:

Waiting to float into your arms
Back, where I, once, belong
Hoping this isn't true;

Hoping to love you.



AWESOME :) :COOL0020:

patty
11/14/08, 08:55 AM
thank you so much for your appreciation

ctivnan
11/17/08, 11:16 AM
thank you so much for your appreciation


You're welcome! :character: